One the Charmer, One the Charmed
A bumble bee went buzzing by,
A new dawn saw a rose with spirits so high,
He, the bee stopped to look at the rose, a real beauty
She, the rose blushed a pink so lovely, so heavenly.
They played little games in the bright sun,
He suckling her and she having fun,
Her nectar all his to take,
All the hunting tactics for her sake.
Ah! The charmer and the charmed,
All the little games they played.
A new dawn saw a rose with spirits so high,
He, the bee stopped to look at the rose, a real beauty
She, the rose blushed a pink so lovely, so heavenly.
They played little games in the bright sun,
He suckling her and she having fun,
Her nectar all his to take,
All the hunting tactics for her sake.
Ah! The charmer and the charmed,
All the little games they played.
posted by OtherHalf at 1:57 AM
6 Comments:
sounds perverted, or is it just me ;)
Gif
@dg: Same here. The work seems akin to ancient tamil poetry on love, or even vairamuthu's lyrics (i find most of his lyrics to be highly perverted). @betterhalf: Just like your poetry, both comments seem ambiguous - are they compliments or not?!
@Lc 7 Dg: I corroborate :p
@Suzy: Hmmm...even the most simple of your poems seem to have another connotation if read in a different frame of mind. This could have been a nice kid's rhyme, but now it is more apt for the ones who make them kids :p
Damn! I am so kicked with my comment :D
@Gif,
Can i pretend to be an innocent 5 year old?
@lc
Umm..this was written with the intention to tickle a wee bit of the perversion we are all subject to....But that is where it stands.......
@kumari
Do you want to remain a little girl that refuses to grow up. Then just imagine sunny settings a lovely primrose dancing to the tunes of a bumble bee, one teasing, the other teased. Innocent, happy, gay......
Now u decide to grow up and then it is a whole new ball game ;)...and here there really was no pun and anything that may have been inferred otherwise is the work of the inferer and the writer bears no responsibility ;)
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